Does the AP consider this to be a well written story? It's not even a well written headline. This is the sort of 'reporting' which forces you to go out and research everything on your own, if you care about it at all. It is the journalistic equivalent of going to a restaurant and having the waiters ignore you all evening.
Seriously ouch, ryuge. We ought to get up a petition for AP to hire a couple of Rantburg's pros and badanov, who know what questions to ask and how to find the answers... and how to write up the result beautifully. |
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